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At the height of British Metal, it was considered an art form. Now it's just for pussies and Emo kids. Wait..... Aren't they the same?

Creator: 5150monkeylove

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5150monkeylove - September 17, 2010, 12:46 am,
hints, tips, or suggestions?
agdaniele - September 17, 2010, 12:50 am,
You went after emo... too easy, and too overplayed. Air guitar was a good angle on the pic, but you distracted from that humor with irrelevant tangents.
5150monkeylove - September 17, 2010, 12:57 am,
so I should have left it as "just for pussies" Thank you.
agdaniele - September 17, 2010, 1:05 am,
Actually, I'd revamp the whole thing... the air guitar playing cat is the focus... you wandered off topic with the second and third lines. I'd have kept the first line, and added a second line - "Whiskers is bringin' it back"
5150monkeylove - September 17, 2010, 1:13 am,
I think resubmitting the poster as my own work wouldnt be a cool thing to do. I will take the hit and learn.
Benlulz - September 17, 2010, 1:47 am,
Naw, the 2e and 3e line actually made me laugh o.O
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