"foul-mouth (comma) mind and borderline" etc. That makes no sense. You have started a separate thought with "mind and borderline psych**ic..." It just doesn't "scan".
EmilioDumphque - May 17, 2014, 2:32 pm,
Perhaps you meant "foul mouthED mind and borderline psychoSIS," Otherwise, I can't figure it out at all.
thecrotchetyoldcynic - May 18, 2014, 12:48 am,
CRAP! Posted the wrong copy! Augh! This was the rough draft. I do apologize that it detracted from the funny.
thecrotchetyoldcynic - May 18, 2014, 12:54 am,
And yes, my edited copied does read, “foul-mouthED," and the comma isn't supposed to be there. I hate when I post the wrong poster.
GaryO - May 18, 2014, 6:38 am,
Actually, I pretty much got it from the get-go, and nodded my head in agreement. But now, now after all this discussion, I somehow feel much better about my lackluster entries of late, and, well, everything in general. 5L
thecrotchetyoldcynic - May 18, 2014, 12:53 pm,
Completely agree. I sometimes stumble upon my old rough drafts that I have posted and Facepalm myself. Lol!